1998年考研英语写作题型分析和范文—本题为漫画加提纲式作文
Directions:
[A] Study the following cartoon carefully and write an essay in no less than 150 words.
[B] Your essay must be written clearly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)
[C] Your essay should meet the requirements below:
1. Write out the messages conveyed by the cartoon.
2. Give your co妹妹ents.
注：图片上的文字是： 本母鸡许诺：
①本鸡下蛋不见棱不见角
②包管有蛋皮，蛋黄和蛋清
审题谋篇
本题为漫画加提纲式作文。文章的主题应当落在嘲讽子虚许诺上，即：许诺本身份内之事这一不良征象。
考生在审题时，从漫画和阁下的打油诗可以看出该文章的关头词为子虚许诺（false promise或empty promise）。提纲有两点请求：写出漫画所要表达的信息；举行评论。因而可知，这是一篇描述加群情的文章。文章第一段可以从描述漫画入手。漫画题材的写作，应偏重捉住漫画自己所转达的信息，即漫画的寄意，对漫画自己不消拘泥于细节。考生可以在段尾点明该漫画所要表达的信息：子虚许诺。因为提纲的第二点请求比力泛，是以，考生可以按照各自的思绪开展。第二段可以针对主题进一步会商，既可以罗列社会上浩繁的子虚许诺的不良征象，也能够偏重会商子虚许诺的风险，亦或追寻子虚许诺的本源。在第三段中考生可提出本身的概念，即，解决该问题的法子。
参考范文
Whoever sees this cartoon
can’t help laughing. How funny it is-A hen is holding a notice promising that her eggs would be round and surely would contain everything a normal egg contains. But at second thought, it is anything but funny because the picture reveals a prevalent phenomenon in our society: Many of these promises are meaningless since the promise provided is nothing but the normal responsibility of the promise maker.
Odd and funny as they sound，such false promises are so prevalent that we cannot afford to ignore them. Manufacturing units guarantee to turn out products of good quality; co妹妹ercial enterprises swear to provide genuine co妹妹odities and enthusiastic services; administration departments assure to perform their tasks effectively and fairly without taking any bribery. As a matter of fact，these cannot be called promises at all since they are
no more than their normal duties and obligations. It seems that we should be grateful to them because they just do what they are supposed to do.
I dare say these empty promises are causing great damage to our society both materially and morally. But the hen and her likes should know that by dishonest words no one could survive the intense competition under market economy system. People engaged in providing all kinds of services should honestly inform their customers of the service that they can enjoy because mutual trust is the foundation of business. They should remember the old saying，"Honesty is the best policy."On the other hand, necessary laws and regulations should be adopted and enforced to ensure a trust worthy economic and social environment. Only in this way, can both parties, service providers and those served, enjoy a healthy atmosphere of mutual trust.
[A] Study the following cartoon carefully and write an essay in no less than 150 words.
[B] Your essay must be written clearly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)
[C] Your essay should meet the requirements below:
1. Write out the messages conveyed by the cartoon.
2. Give your co妹妹ents.
注：图片上的文字是： 本母鸡许诺：
①本鸡下蛋不见棱不见角
②包管有蛋皮，蛋黄和蛋清
审题谋篇
本题为漫画加提纲式作文。文章的主题应当落在嘲讽子虚许诺上，即：许诺本身份内之事这一不良征象。
考生在审题时，从漫画和阁下的打油诗可以看出该文章的关头词为子虚许诺（false promise或empty promise）。提纲有两点请求：写出漫画所要表达的信息；举行评论。因而可知，这是一篇描述加群情的文章。文章第一段可以从描述漫画入手。漫画题材的写作，应偏重捉住漫画自己所转达的信息，即漫画的寄意，对漫画自己不消拘泥于细节。考生可以在段尾点明该漫画所要表达的信息：子虚许诺。因为提纲的第二点请求比力泛，是以，考生可以按照各自的思绪开展。第二段可以针对主题进一步会商，既可以罗列社会上浩繁的子虚许诺的不良征象，也能够偏重会商子虚许诺的风险，亦或追寻子虚许诺的本源。在第三段中考生可提出本身的概念，即，解决该问题的法子。
参考范文
Whoever sees this cartoon
can’t help laughing. How funny it is-A hen is holding a notice promising that her eggs would be round and surely would contain everything a normal egg contains. But at second thought, it is anything but funny because the picture reveals a prevalent phenomenon in our society: Many of these promises are meaningless since the promise provided is nothing but the normal responsibility of the promise maker.
Odd and funny as they sound，such false promises are so prevalent that we cannot afford to ignore them. Manufacturing units guarantee to turn out products of good quality; co妹妹ercial enterprises swear to provide genuine co妹妹odities and enthusiastic services; administration departments assure to perform their tasks effectively and fairly without taking any bribery. As a matter of fact，these cannot be called promises at all since they are
no more than their normal duties and obligations. It seems that we should be grateful to them because they just do what they are supposed to do.
I dare say these empty promises are causing great damage to our society both materially and morally. But the hen and her likes should know that by dishonest words no one could survive the intense competition under market economy system. People engaged in providing all kinds of services should honestly inform their customers of the service that they can enjoy because mutual trust is the foundation of business. They should remember the old saying，"Honesty is the best policy."On the other hand, necessary laws and regulations should be adopted and enforced to ensure a trust worthy economic and social environment. Only in this way, can both parties, service providers and those served, enjoy a healthy atmosphere of mutual trust.
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